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All the times we’d shared…
All the games we’d play.
They left me so unprepared,
For what you had to say.


When you told me you were leaving,
I thought that I might have died.
So many times I’ve told myself I was dreaming,
But I knew it was a lie.

So painfully my heart is breaking,
So many tears I have cried.
And although my soul is aching,
I know I have to say goodbye.

For all the good times shared,
For all the joy portrayed,
However unprepared,
To you, thanks is all I can say.
©2005-2010 ~JustBeingMe303
:iconjustbeingme303:

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*Sigh*... wrote this a little while ago... Three of my closest friends may be moving -- and it's hard to handle. One's moving for sure... to Maine... =( -- and then my best friend... looks like she's moving to Kitchener. My boyfriend may be moving downtown. Not so far... but three of the best people I've met this year... are probably not going to be here next year. A little depressing. Trying to enjoy the time I have with them ^_^ And seriously hoping the other two don't go anywhere ^_^

Edit: I've re-written the ending to make it sound a little better... xD I'm trying to add a stanza somewhere in the middle - right now, I'm not happy with the shortness of it all xD Hoping to get somewhere soon -- hope you like ^_^

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:iconbangbangangel:
I'm going through that now.

I know how you feel, and that was a very lovely poem! :hug:

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The reason a dog is such a comfort when you're downcast is because he doesn't ask to know why.

I pick my nose :picknose:...but I don't get aroused from it ^^;
:iconjustbeingme303:
Aww -- I feel sorry for you =( :hug: and thanks ^_^

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:rose: Janessa :rose:
"I believe in music the way that some people believe in fairy tales." - August Rush

The measure of who we are is what we do with what we have.
:iconapril-chan:
One of my best friends will be moving in a few months and I jsut met her a little over a year ago. I'm really gonna miss her but she got accepted to a great college where she can really use her talent! *drawing she's on dev too!* So I will miss her but Im really happy for her. I knwo what you mean! This poem is perfect dear! :clap: Loves it lots!
:iconjustbeingme303:
Thanks! ^_^

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:rose: Janessa :rose:
"I believe in music the way that some people believe in fairy tales." - August Rush

The measure of who we are is what we do with what we have.
:iconapril-chan:
your very welcome! NOW!....Go see my crayon drawing! *squels!*
:iconjustbeingme303:
Saw it -- cute ^_^

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:rose: Janessa :rose:
"I believe in music the way that some people believe in fairy tales." - August Rush

The measure of who we are is what we do with what we have.
:iconbangbangangel:
^^ s'ok. you're welcome!

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The reason a dog is such a comfort when you're downcast is because he doesn't ask to know why.

I pick my nose :picknose:...but I don't get aroused from it ^^;
:iconhawaiiandream:
awww. im going through a little bit of that now. one of my friends is movin and im really gonna miss her. :( i know how u feel. if ya ever need nething, u know where i am! :) :hug:

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Natahaniel... I miss you more than words can explain. :cries:

"Just because I'm a girl....doesn't mean I'm a lady" my personal quote. it suits me perfectly!

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